This morning after
a deep dreamless sleep
brings no sunlight east
yet
behind the raincloud scrim
its warm face glows
as in mine, dearheart,
you do
a deep dreamless sleep
brings no sunlight east
yet
behind the raincloud scrim
its warm face glows
as in mine, dearheart,
you do
I love the off beat prosody in this, it complements the asymmetrical rhythm ~ as wave. Powerful scansion here. Reassures as it haunts ...
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